Wednesday, November 5, 2014

Nov 5th Draft (just the intro, body paragraphs will be posted later)

Jelani Prtchard
Professor Werry
6 Nov. 2014
Draft

             Research and several studies show that in the United States..[*stops reading*]. And that is when we usually stop or want to stop reading a text in today's era. Nicholas Carr, who is a writer for The Atlantic discusses how the internet has negatively affected the way we read, write, and think in his article, "Is Google Making Us Stupid?" In his text, which was ironically dreadful to read through, discusses the aspects of how the internet has negatively altered our ways of reading and writing. Carr questions if the internet has made us stupid enough to the point where we can't even get through a full text of reading without wanting to give up on it because of the lack of interest we have. Carr also claims that the world wide web has tweaked his methods of writing. With a few searches on Google, information is quickly found right under your finger tips. Writing papers or researching studies has evolved with the help of the internet, while the old method that once required stacks of print and hours at the library has seem to drifted off along with the wind. In this text Carr uses multiple credible sources that he calls 'literary-types' who gives input on the internet and its influences on readers and writers. Carr argues that as a literary-type, he and others have trouble staying focused reading an article or text the more they use the web. In this day and age, our generation has grew up with technology that helps advances education. It is important for us to understand whether or not if the technology, particularly the internet, is a negative influence on our reading, writing, and thinking skills or not. Carr does make favorable arguments, but there are also flaws in his text. In this paper I will discuss how Carr presents his argument to the audience by analyzing strategies he uses.    

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